Writing Slow River: A Conversation



Tell me about SLOW RIVER, about what it was like to write.

It's a novel I have been waiting to write since I was twenty years old but didn't have the skill. To be honest, I'm not sure if I will ever have the skill to do the themes and characters justice. But two years ago I reached the point where I had to write it down, ready or not. I'm not sure which aspect was the most demanding: the technical, or emotional.

I wrote the first ten thousand words twice and threw them away. Then wrote the first thirty-five thousand and tossed those, and then I despaired. And then the triple-Lore viewpoint occurred to me, and the cyclical structure, and the different tenses, and then I had a framework to hang everything on. Once all that clicked, the actual writing didn't take long at all: I wrote each viewpoint chronologically. Chopping everything up (literally), spreading it out all over the living room, dining room and office floors, then splicing it all back together took two solid weeks of twelve hour days and curses at playful cats and petulant glares at my partner when she told me it was time to eat. It was important that the emotional threads followed the plot threads, character development and simple reader movement through the book.

The themes of emotional development and growth--physical, sexual, personal--and of self recognition, and responsibility were the most important facets of the novel. Get right how the characters feel, and the rest will follow.


Someone told me recently that SLOW RIVER could be the love child of William Boyd's BRAZZAVILLE BEACH and Margaret Atwood's CATS EYE.

[Laughs.] With the concomitant hybrid vigor, I hope. Technically, yes, RIVER owes a great deal to Boyd, and I have always admired Atwood's work. Emotionally and texturally, though, my work is different. The texture is to do with description--something I learned from those authors to whom I tend to refer as the English Landscape Writers. I want a reader to be able to pick up my work, open it at any page, and know immediately the smells and sounds of a character's surroundings; the taste of the wind, if there is any wind; the ambient air temperature. More to the point, I want the milieu to say something of the character surrounded by it. Emotionally, I want SLOW RIVER to feel...well, like a river. A river in its many phases: cold and thin and bitter; smooth and deep and dangerous; big and glad and energetic.

My aim with SLOW RIVER was to create something whole.



So who did you write it for?


Myself. But if you mean, who do I expect to read it, I have two different answers, one rather cynical, one hopeful. I *hope* that a lot of different people--men and women, gay and straight, those in search of serious literature and those wanting a beach book--will pick up SLOW RIVER and give it a try. I think there is much there to please many...if they approach it without the artificial barriers and prejudices in place which result from the old "divide and conquer" strategy employed by many critics. So I *suspect* that what will really happen is that some readers will be put off by the fact that it is being published by an imprint that has specialized in fantasy and science fiction, and still others by the fact that both the author and main character are women.


What do you mean by "divide and conquer?"

Women and men who are confident of themselves and their place in the world see people first, gender second. Readers who have no worries about their own taste, discrimination or fashion sense see fiction first, genre second. It's the insecure, those who *need* to feel superior ("Someone--at least--is less hip than I am!") who sneer at, say, women or Jews or science fiction, at gays or crime fiction or people in wheelchairs. "Not us," they say, "not *our* sort of thing. Not top drawer." Those who love fiction--who love the discovery of fine writing, characters who will suck you into their worlds with their dilemmas and attempted solutions--approach the work without artificially constructed preconceptions.



Have you really been sneered at?


[Laughs.] Countless times! But rarely by anyone who has actually read my work. You wouldn't believe the number of people who pick up AMMONITE or one of my novellas and say, "Well, I've always thought science fiction was rubbish, but I *liked* this..." And the surprise is so naked in their voices that I have to bite my tongue to not say, "It's not polite to be too surprised," because what they really mean is: I've been told sci-fi is pulp rubbish, so I've never read any. Even after reading my work, and realizing it's good, they can't take the next step, which is to consider the fact that, despite what they may have been told, perhaps not all science fiction is rubbish simply because it is science fiction. No, they say (even those who may have gone to good schools, and learned logic): I *liked* this, it's good, therefore it's not really science fiction, is it?

So you would definitely say your second novel, SLOW RIVER, is science fiction?

Yes. Particularly if you use Darko Suvin's definition, that science fiction is the literature of cognitive estrangement. But, to be honest, I really don't care how it gets defined: a novel about sex and industrial sabotage (which is what HarperCollins UK are calling it), lesbian science fiction, or a page-turner about corruption and corporate dynasties (which how Ballantine Del Rey have described it)...as long as it gets read with an open mind.

But how do *you* think of the novel?

As an exploration of the Essential Self, and of personal responsibility. [Smiles.] But that description won't sell books.

How do you think it will be reviewed?

Anyone's guess. I was at OutWrite, the lesbian and gay writers' conference in Boston, in March. I was, frankly, shocked at the ignorance and prejudice casually displayed. At the end of the conference I was in the exhibitors room; I had two advance reading copies of SLOW RIVER left; I didn't want to lug them with me on the plane. I approached a woman at one of the booths. She will remain nameless, but let's just say she represented a review journal. I said hello and asked her if she wanted a galley of my new book. She reached out a rather disdainful hand. "Well, I'm sure there's someone in our office who likes this kind of thing."

"*What* kind of thing, exactly," I wanted to know.

"You know, rockets and ray guns and computers."

"Just try it," I said politely (displaying great restraint), "you might like it."

There are many editors and reviewers and critics like this woman. They will condemn the book without reading it. "Oh," they will sniff, "science fiction", the same way those who compile the Canon have previously sniffed, "Oh, women's fiction. Minority fiction. Regional fiction." What, I wonder, are they afraid of?


Do you think these reviewers are missing out?

Definitely. They probably have never read anything by Mary Renault because it's historical fiction. Nothing by Audre Lourde because it's Black fiction and poetry. Nothing by Willa Cather--after all, she only wrote about the prairie.... Perhaps they have never realized that Shelley's FRANKENSTEIN is science fiction. And Aldous Huxley's work, and that of Geoff Ryman, Joanna Russ, Ursula Le Guin. So, for that matter is THE ROBBER BRIDE, by Margaret Atwood, and THE HANDMAID'S TALE. Then there are the magic realists like Marquez. And Doris Lessing, William Golding, Toni Morrison.... The list is practically endless.

They're all fantastic, in many senses of the word.

But people like their cliques, their sense of power and belonging while they condemn others to shiver out in the cold.


Will SLOW RIVER suffer because of this attitude?

Possibly. It has a lot that canon-makers can use against it: it's set in the near future. It has some actual, gasp, science in it. (I must admit here to not understanding why it has become so acceptable to profess ignorance of anything resembling a basic understanding of *any* scientific principle.)

The main character is a lesbian. Those who like to read about bitter young men in New York will hate this book. [Grins.] At least I hope so.

But in the end, no, I don't think it will suffer. After all, there are always mavericks out there who will pick up a book, intrigued by the title or cover art; who read the first paragraph and are hooked. There will always be the kind of people who live their lives with gusto and vibrancy and genuine pleasure and will enjoy this book.

It's my hope that smart people and thoughtful people and wise people pick up SLOW RIVER and nod and say to themselves, "Yes, life can be like this. How interesting. How true." I want my characters and places and themes to live on the minds of those who read my work, and to change them, just a little.

Seattle 1995

 

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